FFU

              Cloud 9

                                      8

                  7

   6

letting go

          pull me d

                                o

                   w

                              n

                   bird-

                                heart-

            beat

                      nose

                                        dive

                        into you

                          rain-

                                 bow-

                  sliding

                          into your

                                             lap

↓ I am falling for you, thus, you can send me where I came from. ↑

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3 thoughts on “FFU

  1. When I first saw this, I didn’t understand the numbers. Then I got to the line about falling down and when I reread it I was like, “duh!” I don’t know how I missed it. Anyways, I love it. Typically, poetry done in shapes or movement on the page is poorly done, but I think what you have done hear really adds to your piece (which is the part most people miss!) Wonderful!

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